What's up with using "woke American" and "Black woman in America" interchangeably here? Do you consider the both to be interchangeable? Of so, you didn't explain why. Perhaps you think this represents a prime example of a woke American?

By generalizing a generalization, you start to lose all focus early in this piece. Even in an opinion piece, salient factual detail is important for these overarching points.

Wild card: explaining your ideas is now woke.