The studio is asking for a rewrite.
“Wow, mommy, look at that balloon. It’s the prettiest,” the little girl said, pointing at me. I was the newest entry in the 2020 Great Reno Balloon Race, the largest free hot-air balloon event in the world. My envelope is is covered with bright flowers encircling a gold “We’re #1” logo.
"Daughter. I love you, but Capitalism is an economic system based on the private ownership of the means of production and their operation for profit. We don't need to give these corporate bootlickers a damn thing. Come on, let's go for a hike." The two walk off hand-in-hand, smiling.